请温柔 - 网站批评 [英] Be gentle - site critique please
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我是一个长期的潜伏者，所以我知道会发生什么！
有人可以看看这个并做出适当的评论吗？
http://members.aardvark.net.au/grakat/temp/
它只有四页，它应该可以工作
如果有人可以通过联系页面上的表格帮助我（我复制了
）我将不胜感激。请不要使用表格发送任何东西
我。目前，它指向的addy被禁用!!
I''m a long-time lurker, so I know what to expect!
Can someone please look at this and make appropriate comments?
http://members.aardvark.net.au/grakat/temp/
It''s only four pages, and it should pretty much work
If someone can help me out with the ''form'' on the contact page (which I
copied) I''d be grateful. PLEASE DON''T USE THE FORM TO SEND ANYTHING TO
ME. At the moment, the addy it points to is disabled!!
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Joe写道：
我我是长期潜伏者，所以我知道会发生什么！
有人可以看看这个并做出适当的评论吗？
http://members.aardvark.net.au/grakat/temp/
只有四页，它应该可以工作
如果有人可以通过联系页面上的表格帮助我（我已经复制了），我将不胜感激。请不要使用表格发送给我的任何人。目前，它指向的addy已被禁用!!
I''m a long-time lurker, so I know what to expect!
Can someone please look at this and make appropriate comments?
http://members.aardvark.net.au/grakat/temp/
It''s only four pages, and it should pretty much work
If someone can help me out with the ''form'' on the contact page (which I
copied) I''d be grateful. PLEASE DON''T USE THE FORM TO SEND ANYTHING TO
ME. At the moment, the addy it points to is disabled!!
主页：没有HTML 4.01错误。
艺术家的页面：同上。
图片库：ditto。
联系页面：55 HTML 4.01错误。
CSS：一个错误。
易于导航。用于链接的直接按钮，通过CSS创建
。
背景图片有些烦人，尤其是文字
出现在它。也许它可能会变得更加苍白。
传记中缺少艺术家的照片。另外，如果你给艺术家从一个城镇搬到另一个城镇的日期
，他的
出生日期怎么样？
几乎一半从家里上网的用户仍然使用
拨号调制解调器。背景图像应该具有较低的分辨率
，以便加载更快。此外，图片库应该使用
低分辨率缩略图，链接到更大的图片（每页
页面一个）。
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David E. Ross
< URL：http：//www.rossde.com/>
我使用Mozilla作为我的Web浏览器，因为我想要一个符合Web标准的浏览器
。请参阅< URL：http：//www.mozilla.org/>。
Home page: No HTML 4.01 errors.
Artist''s page: ditto.
Image gallery: ditto.
Contact page: 55 HTML 4.01 errors.
CSS: One error.
Simple to navigate. Straight-forward buttons for links, created
via CSS.
Background image is somewhat annoying, especially where text
appears over it. Perhaps it could be made even more pale.
Photo of artist is missing from biography. Also, if you give dates
on which the artist moved from one town to another, how about his
date of birth?
Almost half of those who access the Internet from home still use
dial-up modems. The background image should have less resolution
so that it loads more quickly. Also, the image gallery should use
low-resolution thumbnails, with links to larger images (one per
page).
--
David E. Ross
<URL:http://www.rossde.com/>
I use Mozilla as my Web browser because I want a browser that
complies with Web standards. See <URL:http://www.mozilla.org/>.
星期四，2005年11月24日02:07:04 GMT来自Joe< jo * ******* @ yahoo.com.au>：
Thu, 24 Nov 2005 02:07:04 GMT from Joe <jo********@yahoo.com.au>:
我是一个长期的潜伏者，所以我知道会发生什么！
有人可以看看这个和做出适当的评论？
http：//成员.aardvark.net.au / grakat / temp /
这只有四页，它应该可以工作
如果有人可以帮我解决'联系页面上的表格（我已经复制了）我将不胜感激。请不要使用表格发送给我的任何人。目前，它指向的addy已被禁用!!
I''m a long-time lurker, so I know what to expect!
Can someone please look at this and make appropriate comments?
http://members.aardvark.net.au/grakat/temp/
It''s only four pages, and it should pretty much work
If someone can help me out with the ''form'' on the contact page (which I
copied) I''d be grateful. PLEASE DON''T USE THE FORM TO SEND ANYTHING TO
ME. At the moment, the addy it points to is disabled!!
Goanna Hill该页面上的按钮不做任何事情。最终
我发现这是因为那个页面是Goanna Hill。考虑改善视觉提示
- 例如，使该按钮更淡。
在Everingham页面上，我看到艺术家的照片。 （单词）相反
的照片。
我喜欢图片库，但当我到达它的中间时
我不清楚给定的标题是否适用于上面的照片或
下面的照片。
我不明白什么帮助你要求联系表格，
，因为你告诉我们不要使用它。
（网站评论更经常被要求用于ciwasite - 设计，通过
的方式。）
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Stan Brown，Oak Road Systems，汤普金斯县，纽约，美国
http://OakRoadSystems.com/
HTML 4.01规范： http://www.w3.org/TR/html401/
验证人： http://validator.w3.org /
CSS 2.1规范： http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/
验证器： http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/
为什么我们不能帮助你：
http：// diveintomark .org / archives / 200 ... _ wont_help_you
The "Goanna Hill" button on that page doesn''t do anything. Eventually
I figured out that it''s because that page is Goanna Hill. Consider
improving the visual cue -- make that button paler, for instance.
On the Everingham page, I see "photo of the artist" (words) instead
of the photo.
I liked the image gallery, but by the time I got to the middle of it
I wasn''t clear whether a given title applied to the photo above or
the photo below.
I don''t understand what help you''re asking for the contact form,
since you tell us not to use it.
(Site critiques are more often requested in c.i.w.a.site-design, by
the way.)
--
Stan Brown, Oak Road Systems, Tompkins County, New York, USA
http://OakRoadSystems.com/
HTML 4.01 spec: http://www.w3.org/TR/html401/
validator: http://validator.w3.org/
CSS 2.1 spec: http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/
validator: http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/
Why We Won''t Help You:
http://diveintomark.org/archives/200..._wont_help_you
文章< MP **************** ********@news.individual.net> ，
th ************ @ fastmail.fm 说...
In article <MP************************@news.individual.net> ,
th************@fastmail.fm says...
周四，2005年11月24日02:07:04 GMT来自Joe< jo ******** @ yahoo.com.au>：
Thu, 24 Nov 2005 02:07:04 GMT from Joe <jo********@yahoo.com.au>:
http://members.aardvark.net.au/grakat/temp/
Goanna Hill该页面上的按钮不做任何事情。
我的显示器上有几种颜色较暗 - 显然不足以让你的产品与b
产生差异。谢谢。我会调查一下。
在Everingham页面上，我看到艺术家的照片。 （单词）而不是照片。
bugger。我太小心了！
我不清楚给定的标题是否适用于上面的照片或
下面的照片。
优秀的评论。 Ta我不明白你要求联系表格有什么帮助，
因为你告诉我们不要使用它。
（网站评论经常在ciwasite中被要求 - 设计，通过
的方式。）
The "Goanna Hill" button on that page doesn''t do anything.
It''s a few shades darker on my monitor - obviously not enough to make a
difference on yours. Thanks. I''ll look into it.
On the Everingham page, I see "photo of the artist" (words) instead
of the photo.
bugger. and I was soooo careful!
I wasn''t clear whether a given title applied to the photo above or
the photo below.
Excellent comment. Ta I don''t understand what help you''re asking for the contact form,
since you tell us not to use it.
(Site critiques are more often requested in c.i.w.a.site-design, by
the way.)
谢谢Stan。
所以除了不上传一张图片
我想我希望有人能通过表格（代码）与我交谈。我有一个关于表格的精神障碍，通常是（a）避免使用它们，或者（b）
从其他地方复制一个。
ciwasite-design不是由我的isp承担的 - 我会向他们询问它
Thanks Stan.
So apart from not uploading one pic
I guess I hoped someone would talk me through the (code of) the form. I
have a mental block about forms and usually (a) avoid using them, or (b)
copy one from somewhere else.
c.i.w.a.site-design is not carried by my isp - I''ll ask them about it
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